My best friend is J.J, he is from Tehran. He lives with his parents. He is a computer engineer. He is average height, with dark hair. He has M.S degree in computer field. We communicate with email and cell phone with each other. J.J is manager of software projects now. He tries to improve his English language skills like me. He is my colleague. We usually see each other every day, but we rarely talk, because we are usually so busy the whole working day. But sometimes we go to park and talk about everything. He works out at gym twice a week on Sunday and Tuesday after work. In my opinion the most important trait about him is frankness and honesty, and he is so self-confidence.
Mojtaba Golestani is my best friend. He lives in Sirjan and I live in Tehran. He works at Sarcheshmeh Mine. He is married and has a child called Parmida. We have known each other for more than 14 years. I have known him since we were studying mining engineering at Yazd University , but after one year he changed his course to mechanical engineering and went to study at Bahonar University in Kerman. We always keep in touch with each other. I often talk to him on the telephone once a month and tell him about my work and everything that is happening to me and he does the same. Sometimes he sends SMS to me and I reply him. Whenever I need help I call him. I think our friendship will last forever . He is reliable and this is very important.
My Best friend Behzad Taheri is my best friend.He is from Ahvaz but I’m from Gorgan.He lives in Mahshahr and I live in Tehran.we met each other whene enter the university and we could be good friend during that period.8 years have passed since that time and we are in touch all the time. He works in Mahshahr Petrochemy.He is an electronic engineer and I work in a personal company in Tehran and also I’m a ms sudent. Behzad has married recently but I am not married.we usually talk on the telephone and sometimes we send sms for each other. We are very happy because we want that meet each other in this month.In this new age of Communications it is very simple that we be in touch or met each other. I've noticed that a good friend can cause that you choose rightway in the life.
Below is the corrected version of Mohammad Taghi Mazini. But first remember that there is no space before each punctuation mark (eg, ? : , ; ) and at least one space after it. And start every sentence with a capital letter.
Behzad Taheri is my best friend. He is from Ahvaz but I’m from Gorgan. He lives in Mahshahr and I live in Tehran. (W)e met each other whene (when) enter the university and we could be good friend(s) during that period. 8(Eight) years have passed since that time and we are in touch all the time.
He works in Mahshahr Petrochemy. He is an electronic engineer and I work in a personal company in Tehran and also I’m a(an) ms sudent(student).
Behzad has(got) married recently but I am not married. we(We) usually talk on the telephone and sometimes we send sms for(to) each other.
We are very happy because we want that(to) meet each other in this month. In this new age of Communications it is very simple that we be in touch(simple to be in touch) or met(meet) each other. I've noticed that a good friend can cause that (can help)you choose rightway(the right way) in the life (in life).
God is my best friend. We're both from a ntural world, but now i live in this world and live on earth. i can't see it but always God looks after me. I can see God on the earth with his points. we are usually in touch, but i know that, i'm not a good friend for god, becayse often i hurt the God with my behavior. I often talk to God 3 times in day with my prayers and i know he always hears me. i'm very lucky. in this new age of lieing and dishonesty in our social, God is my best friend.
Babak Dadmand - bc3 class no. 110 My best friend is b.h who lives now in germany.When we were young , he talked me into studying german language .He decided to emigrate to germany and always told me that i go with him.I started to learn german language at SIMIN INSTITUTE and also he taught me extra. After that we decided to exam at AZAD UNIVERSITY for german translator . we passed the exam but he went to germany and i stayed and studied it.He studied Biology and work in a laboratory.Usually we contact together by mail . I went to see him on january after about 18 years when they were in vacation for new year.He was waiting for me at the Airport and so happy like me.I stayed there for 5 days.He is married now and also has 2 children. We walked on the street and talked about past times when we were single. I told him to come back to his county and lives here but he said , he cant live in iran because he married with a german girl and also his children cant speak persian language and the style life is diffrent. After i came back ,he tell me that he memories that days , we were together in germany.
There must be better ways to learn and enjoy English and even be able to score high in TOEFL / IELTS.
I have been teaching English as a foreign language (EFL) since 1990 as a side job; However, it soon became my career of love and joy.
Information age and the overwhelming exposure of learners to English media and resources leave no room for conventional static methods. Moreover, teachers should help intermediate and advanced students drive through the information highway.
I must add that I received my BS in ME and MS in IE in the US and my major related jobs have been rather technical in nature and mostly concerned with Information Technology/Systems.
My best friend
ReplyDeleteMy best friend is J.J, he is from Tehran.
He lives with his parents. He is a computer engineer. He is average height, with dark hair.
He has M.S degree in computer field.
We communicate with email and cell phone with each other. J.J is manager of software projects now. He tries to improve his English language skills like me. He is my colleague. We usually see each other every day, but we rarely talk, because we are usually so busy the whole working day. But sometimes we go to park and talk about everything. He works out at gym twice a week on Sunday and Tuesday after work. In my opinion the most important trait about him is frankness and honesty, and he is so self-confidence.
Very good Farhad, almost no mistakes.
ReplyDeleteSome articles (a, an, the) are missing, can anyone find them?
Thanks for your comments Mr.Khaksar.
ReplyDeleteI think, i find some of missed articles:
1- At line six i missed "the" before "manager of software projects".
2- At line two from bottom i missed "the" before "frankness and honesty".
Mohsen kianean
ReplyDeleteMojtaba Golestani is my best friend. He lives in Sirjan and I live in Tehran. He works at Sarcheshmeh Mine. He is married and has a child called Parmida. We have known each other for more than 14 years. I have known him since we were studying mining engineering at Yazd University , but after one year he changed his course to mechanical engineering and went to study at Bahonar University in Kerman. We always keep in touch with each other. I often talk to him on the telephone once a month and tell him about my work and everything that is happening to me and he does the same. Sometimes he sends SMS to me and I reply him. Whenever I need help I call him. I think our friendship will last forever . He is reliable and this is very important.
تهيه كننده: محسن كيانيان
Hi, I will put my introduce as a comment soon.
ReplyDeleteHi, Hamidreza.
ReplyDeleteI think you should say:
I will put my introduction as a comment soon.
Hi, Mohsen.
ReplyDeleteI think you should say:
"and everything that is happening to us is the same"
My Best friend
ReplyDeleteBehzad Taheri is my best friend.He is from Ahvaz but I’m from Gorgan.He lives in Mahshahr and I live in Tehran.we met each other whene enter the university and we could be good friend during that period.8 years have passed since that time and we are in touch all the time.
He works in Mahshahr Petrochemy.He is an electronic engineer and I work in a personal company in Tehran and also I’m a ms sudent.
Behzad has married recently but I am not married.we usually talk on the telephone and sometimes we send sms for each other.
We are very happy because we want that meet each other in this month.In this new age of Communications it is very simple that we be in touch or met each other.
I've noticed that a good friend can cause that you choose rightway in the life.
I forget that I say my nickname is Mohsen.I'm mohammad taghi mazini.so if see mohsen don't surprise
ReplyDeleteMohsen Kianeean's writing is great. But check the usage of the verb "reply".
ReplyDeleteBelow is the corrected version of Mohammad Taghi Mazini. But first remember that there is no space before each punctuation mark (eg, ? : , ; ) and at least one space after it. And start every sentence with a capital letter.
ReplyDeleteBehzad Taheri is my best friend. He is from Ahvaz but I’m from Gorgan. He lives in Mahshahr and I live in Tehran. (W)e met each other whene (when) enter the university and we could be good friend(s) during that period. 8(Eight) years have passed since that time and we are in touch all the time.
He works in Mahshahr Petrochemy. He is an electronic engineer and I work in a personal company in Tehran and also I’m a(an) ms sudent(student).
Behzad has(got) married recently but I am not married. we(We) usually talk on the telephone and sometimes we send sms for(to) each other.
We are very happy because we want that(to) meet each other in this month. In this new age of Communications it is very simple that we be in touch(simple to be in touch) or met(meet) each other.
I've noticed that a good friend can cause that (can help)you choose rightway(the right way) in the life (in life).
Hi. Thanks for your advice Mr.Khaksar.
ReplyDeleteI will try to modify my mistakes
God is my best friend. We're both from a ntural world, but now i live in this world and live on earth. i can't see it but always God looks after me. I can see God on the earth with his points. we are usually in touch, but i know that, i'm not a good friend for god, becayse often i hurt the God with my behavior.
ReplyDeleteI often talk to God 3 times in day with my prayers and i know he always hears me.
i'm very lucky. in this new age of lieing and dishonesty in our social, God is my best friend.
Babak Dadmand - bc3 class no. 110
ReplyDeleteMy best friend is b.h who lives now in germany.When we were young , he talked me into studying german language .He decided to emigrate to germany and always told me that i go with him.I started to learn german language at SIMIN INSTITUTE and also he taught me extra. After that we decided to exam at AZAD UNIVERSITY for german translator . we passed the exam but he went to germany and i stayed and studied it.He studied Biology and work in a laboratory.Usually we contact together by mail .
I went to see him on january after about 18 years when they were in vacation for new year.He was waiting for me at the Airport and so happy like me.I stayed there for 5 days.He is married now and also has 2 children.
We walked on the street and talked about past times when we were single.
I told him to come back to his county and lives here but he said , he cant live in iran because he married with a german girl and also his children cant speak persian language and the style life is diffrent.
After i came back ,he tell me that he memories that days , we were together in germany.